Tuesday, September 6, 2011

Tuesday Review: Unclaimed

Unclaimed
By Courtney Milan
Publisher: HQN
Release Date: September 20, 2011
Five Stars

Weary of the attention and adulation that have followed in the wake of his book, A Gentleman’s Practical Guide to Chastity, Sir Mark Turner leaves London behind and retreats to Shepton Mallet, his childhood home, in search of peace and anonymity. He does escape the crowds that followed him in the city, but even in this country town he cannot escape veneration and the extremes of the Male Chastity Brigade.
Another new resident of Shepton Mallet, Jessica Farleigh, a dark-haired beauty with a mysterious smile and an equally mysterious past, attracts a very different kind of attention from that awarded Mark. But even her sternest critics don’t suspect Jessica’s true reason for leaving London. Hired by a man who fears Mark is about to be given a political position the man wants for himself, Jessica is a courtesan set to seduce Mark and expose him as a hypocrite to those who view him as the champion of male chastity.

Although far from immune to Jessica’s beauty, Mark easily resists her early, obvious attempt at seduction. But as they spend more time together, his liking for her increases, as does his appreciation for her intelligence, wit, and other qualities that make her uniquely herself. He wants more than her body. He wants her to share his life.
It is his desire to make her his wife that pushes Jessica to tell Mark the truth. Her conscience has troubled her through most of their relationship, but her need for the money that will allow her to survive and to free herself from a courtesan’s life is stronger than her conscience. But while she is willing to ruin Mark’s reputation, she cannot bring herself to accept his proposal and ruin his life. The truth leads to heartbreak, but it also—eventually—sets them free for an HEA.

Mark is a rare character, a genuinely good, deeply human man who is comfortable in his own skin. He is a virgin by choice, and Milan makes certain her readers understand that it is a choice made from knowledge rather than ignorance. Mark eloquently explains his choice to Jessica.

“It cheapens what I’ve accomplished,” Mark said, “to imagine me a saint. To believe I am untempted, that I pass through this life without feeling lust or want or desire. I said it in the first chapter of my book, and yet nobody seems to believe me. Chastity is hard.

“I hadn’t thought—”

“I want. I lust. I desire.” He scrubbed his hand through sandy blond hair at that, shaking his head. “No. You’re right. You don’t deserve euphemisms. I want
you. I lust after you. I desire you.

She might have been the only woman in the world, pinned by his gaze.

“But what I don’t do is act.”

Too frequently for my tastes a “strong heroine” in romance fiction is synonymous with a heroine who seems to be a character in costume, a 21st-century woman in 19th-century dress. In Jessica, Milan gives readers a character who possesses a survivor’s strengths and yet is a woman of her own time, a time when a double standard was entrenched and one misstep was enough to make a woman an outcast. Jessica hates that she can be owned by a man, but she accepts responsibility for her choices. Thus she proves herself an adult woman in a world that would make her no more than a horse or a falcon to be purchased, trained, and possessed. She becomes, as Mark declares her, “her own knight.”

I love these characters. I love that they are adults with intelligence, imperfections, histories, and humor, and I love their self-knowledge and the ways it increases throughout the book. I love the gender reversal of a virginal hero and an experienced heroine out to ruin him. I love the relationship between the brothers. I love the chiaroscuro of the book. I love the lucid grace of the prose. Sentimentalist that I am, I even loved the ending, which may seem too contrived for some readers.

Unclaimed can be read as a standalone, but readers of the first book will have a richer context for Mark’s character and for the bonds that unite him with his brothers. It is the second novel in Milan’s Turner series, preceded by Unveiled (Ash’s book) and to be followed by Unraveled (Smite’s book) later this year. I am eager to read Smite’s book.

Are you a fan of virginal heroes? Courtesan heroines? Gender reversals?












Friday, September 2, 2011

Fast Forward to Fall


The  calendar says September, the kids are back in school, and the weather forecasters are promising temperatures in the mid-80s next week. Even though officially the first day of fall is still weeks away (September 23), all the signs in my world tell me the season has begun. I’m ready for it. Fall is my favorite season, and after a hot summer that started in May, I’m even more eager than usual for cooler days, football weekends, and lower utility bills. I’m also eager for the books of fall.

I confess that I’ve rushed the season a bit. I’ve already read three September releases and have begun a fourth. I’ve even started Christmas reads with Sherryl Woods’s An O’Brien Family Christmas (already reviewed here), Toni Blake’s Holly Lane (Destiny #4), and Robyn Carr’s Bring Me Home for Christmas (Virgin River #16). Reviews for the latter two are forthcoming. But that means I still have over fifty books that I will be adding to my TBR mountain over the next few months. I’m fudging a bit by including the December 27 releases on my list. Technically these are winter books, but seeing them here makes their release dates seem closer.  I should also add the caveat that this is a list of books from my personal book calendar, mostly books by my auto-buy authors; it is far from a comprehensive list.



SEPTEMBER

Leigh Michaels                  The Wedding Affair 9/1

Jeanne Adams                  Deadly Little Lies 9/6
C.A. Belmond                    A Rather Remarkable Homecoming 9/6
Helen Brenna                    Redemption at Mirabelle (Mirabelle Island #7) 9/6
Christina Dodd                  Revenge at Bella Terra (Scarlet Deception # 2) 9/6
Jo Goodman                     Kissing Comfort 9/6
Ashley March                    Romancing the Countess 9/6
Kate Moore                       To Seduce an Angel (Sons of Sin, Book 3) 9/6
Kay Stockham                  The Sheriff’s Daughter (HSR-North Star #3) 9/6

Rose Lerner                      A Lily Among Thorns  9/15

Kathleen Eagle                 One Brave Cowboy (HSE) 9/20
Barbara Freethy               Garden of Secrets (Angel’s Bay #5) 9/20
Courtney Milan                 Unclaimed (The Turners #3) 9/20


Eileen Dreyer                    Always a Temptress (Drake’s Rakes) 9/27
Jane Graves                     Heartstrings and Diamond Rings 9/27
Lavinia Kent                      What a Duke Wants 9/27
Debbie Macomber            1225 Christmas Tree Lane (Cedar Cove #12) 9/27
Susan Mallery                   Only His (Fool’s Gold #6) 9/27
Anne Mallory                     In Total Surrender (Secrets #3) 9/27
Mariah Stewart                  Hometown Girl (Chesapeake Diaries #4) 9/27
Sherryl Woods                  An O’Brien Family Christmas (Chesapeake Shores #8) 9/27


OCTOBER



Grace Burrowes                Lady Sophia’s Christmas Wish (Windham Sisters #1) 10/1


Suzanne Enoch                A Beginners Guide To Rakes 10/4
Janice Kay Johnson         All That Remains (HSR) 10/4
Jeanie London                  No Groom Like Him (HSR) 10/4
Theresa Romain               Season for Temptation 10/4
Jill Shalvis                         Animal Attraction (Animal #2) 10/4
Kay Stockham                  In the Rancher’s Footsteps (HSR-North Star #4) 10/4
Jodi Thomas et al.            A Texas Christmas 10/4


Elizabeth Hoyt                  Scandalous Desires (Maiden Lane #3) 10/18
Christine Merrill                A Regency Christmas Carol 10/18
Karen Hawkins                 Seduced in Scotland  (Hurst Amulet #3)10/18


Toni Blake                        Holly Lane (Destiny #4) 10/25
Robyn Carr                       Bring Me Home for Christmas (Virgin River #16) 10/25
Cara Elliott                       Too Wicked to Wed (Lords of Midnight #1) 10/25
Kristan Higgins                 Until There Was You         10/25
Brenda Novak                  In Close (Bulletproof #3) 10/25


NOVEMBER


Joanna Bourne                 The Black Hawk (Spymaster #4) 11/1
Grace Burrowes               The Virtuoso (Duke’s Obsession #3) 11/1
Kieran Kramer                  If You Give a Girl a Viscount (Impossible Bachelors #4) 11/1
Sarah Mayberry                All They Need (HSR) 11/1
Nora Roberts                    The Next Always (Inn Boonsboro #1) 11/1
Kay Stockham                  Christmas in Montana (HSR-North Star #5) 11/1
Jodi Thomas                     The Comforts of Home (Harmony #3) 11/1
Vicki Lewis Thompson      Holiday Hideout (anthology w/h Shalvis & Kenner)
Karen White                      The Strangers on Montagu Street (Tradd Street #3) 11/1

Nicola Cornick                   Desired (Scandalous Women #5) 11/15
Carla Kelly*                       Coming Home for Christmas (three connected stories) 11/15


Sabrina Jeffries                 To Wed a Wild Lord (hellions of Halstead Hall #4) 11/22
Kasey Michaels                 A Midsummer Night’s Sin 11/22
Jill Shalvis                         Head Over Heels (Lucky Harbor #3) 11/22


Louisa Edwards                Some Like It Hot (Recipe for Love #5) 11/29
 


DECEMBER


Jo Goodman                     A Place Called Home 12/6


Robyn Carr                       Hidden Summit (Virgin River #17) 12/27
Eloisa James                    The Duke Is Mine 12/27
Emily March                     Lover’s Leap (Eternity Springs #4)12/27
Teresa Medeiros              The Pleasure of Your Kiss 12/27
Raeanne Thayne              Woodrose Mountain (Hope’s Crossing #2) 12/27

What fall books are you most eagerly anticipating?


 
*Not new but great news nonetheless: Marian’s Christmas Wish (1989) by Carla Kelly is available this month in print and as an ebook. An ebook of four of Kelly’s Christmas stories ("The Christmas Ornament," "Object of Charity," "Make a Joyful Noise,” and "The Three Kings”) will be available later.

    












Tuesday, August 30, 2011

Tuesday Review: Fatal Destiny


Fatal Destiny
By Marie Force
Publisher: Carina Press
Release Date: September 5, 2011
Five Stars



On September 5, “Fatal Destiny,” a novella that offers readers a look at the wedding week of Washington, D.C., Police Lieutenant Sam Holland and Senator Nick Cappuano, will be available free on the author’s website. Thanks to Carina Press and NetGalley, I had the opportunity to read the novella before the release. While the week before the wedding is filled with the tactics and tensions that fans of the series have come to expect, the wedding itself is perfection.

Sam is still grieving over her recent miscarriage and convinced that she can’t endure the risk of another pregnancy, but, fearful of an emotional meltdown if she talks to Nick about her decision, she has closed him out. Nick knows something is wrong, and he’s wondering if Sam is having second thoughts about the wedding.
Once the two work out their communication problems, Sam plays semantic games with a promise and ends up with another concussion after being shot at. Nick’s protective instincts save her when there’s another threat on her life. But she makes it to her wedding day with only a bruise and a headache.
The wedding itself is a dream from a Vera Wang bridal gown to an unexpected musical guest at the reception. It’s filled with family and sentiment and romance. For those who want visuals, Force has provided fan-voted choices for invitations, flowers, rings, etc. on her blog.
If you have read any of the other Fatal books, you won’t want to miss Sam and Nick’s wedding. If Sam and Nick are new to you, you can sneak in for the ceremony and the start of the honeymoon. My guess is that you’ll fall in love with the characters and go looking for the other Fatal books. Some readers have compared the series to J. D. Robb’s Eve and Roarke. I haven’t read enough of the In Death books to say aye or nay to similarities, but I will say this series now ranks just below Margaret Maron’s Deborah Knott and Julia Spencer-Fleming’s Clare Fergusson/Russ van Alstyne books on my must-read-every-book list of mysteries.
FYI:
Fatal Affair (June 2010) opens the series.
Senator John O’Connor is found murdered. When Sam is assigned to the case, she finds that the senator’s chief of staff and best friend is Nick, a man with whom she’d spent an unforgettable night with six years earlier. Nick is a material witness in Sam’s case, and the last thing her career needs is for her to be involved in a scandal.   
Fatal Justice (January 2011) follows.
Sam and Nick’s personal and professional lives are filled with excitement and conflict. She has been promoted to Lieutenant, and Sam is about to be sworn in to fill his friend John O’Connor’s unexpired term as a U.S. senator from Virginia. The media is more interested in Nick’s love life than in his political positions, and Sam’s facing an internal affairs investigation because of her relationship with Nick. Then a Supreme Court nominee is murdered, and Sam’s past adds another layer of complications.
Fatal Consequences (July 2011) is the third book.
Sam and Nick are at her father’s wedding reception when a phone call involving a dead call girl and a senator once again entangle the cop and the politician in a case. Something’s rotten in Washington, D. C., and Sam’s on the trail. Her ex-husband is released from jail on a technicality, and he’s a threat she and Nick must live with. And they’re planning a wedding!
Fatal Destiny” (September 2011) is being billed as Fatal series 3.5.
Fatal Flaw (February 2012) is next to be released. I have a feeling the honeymoon will be over and conflict and complications will once again be the order of the day.

Have you read any of the Fatal series? What series are must-reads for you? How do you feel about weddings?

Friday, August 26, 2011

Don't Speak for This Reader!

I avoid writing soapbox blog posts as a rule for several reasons. Despite my online presence, I’m essentially a private person who is uncomfortable with personal revelations. I also think the things that drive me crazy don’t bother most other people, and thus to rant about them is to bore my readers. Also, my prose suffers when I rant. I don’t write clearly and gracefully when I’m driven by emotion.  But despite all these reasons for keeping the soapbox packed away, I’m making an exception today because the most recent claim I read that X knows what readers want was the straw that rent this particular reader’s frame, metaphorically speaking.

According to a 2009 report from the National Endowment of the Arts, 119 million Americans read books, and most of them are reading fiction. RWA says that 29 million of these regularly read romance.  Both readers generally and romance readers specifically are large enough groups that easy generalizations about what readers want or what they like seem specious to me.  The most read book of 2010, The Girl Who Kicked the Hornet's Nest by Stieg Larsson, according to Publishers Weekly sales figures, sold 1,900,000 copies. Even if people who read library copies and second-hand copies tripled the number of readers, the best-selling book in America last year was read by less than 5 percent of those 119,000,000 readers. I wasn’t among the 5 percent.

Please understand that I’m not slamming Larsson’s book or any of the other 112 books on PW’s list of bestselling hardcover fiction that I didn’t read last year. My point is that anyone basing his/her conclusions about what readers want on that bestseller list clearly cannot speak for me. With one exception, the books I read that made the list were romance and women’s fiction, two of them by Nora Roberts. But even when I restrict the argument to romance fiction, large generalizations are problematic. RWA lists nine subgenres in romance fiction, and in 2009, the most recent year for which numbers were available, 9,089 new romance titles were released. I read a lot of romance fiction, several hundred books a year, but the books I read in 2009 were just a small fraction of those published.
Most of my romance reading falls into three categories—contemporaries, historicals, and Regencies. I would be most hesitant to describe my reading habits as typical or to draw conclusions about romance readers based on my reading habits or the reading habits of my circle of friends. Even within that relatively small circles, there are as many points of reading differences as there are commonalities. By the same token, anyone who bases her/his conclusions about what readers want only on the popularity of paranormal romance or romantic suspense is leaving me out of the equation.
I understand that publishers and marketers, and perhaps authors, need to make generalizations about readers. I’d just like to see those generalizations qualified. Maybe 85 percent of romance readers do want more novels about vampires, shape shifters, and fallen angels (not a real statistic), but the 15 percent that doesn’t adds up to more than 4 million readers. If just a tenth of that minority read a single book without paranormal elements, those readers would propel the book to bestsellerdom.
Just within the past few weeks I’ve been told by various voices that
1.     Readers want hotter romance. (I don’t especially. I’m more concerned with the power of the story and my engagement with the characters than the heat level. I read and enjoy romance novels that range from sweet to hot.)
2.     Readers are bored with details of setting. (I’m not. A sense of place is important to me, and I prefer enough details to make the world of the book feel real.)
3.     Readers look for action in the first paragraph. (I look for something that makes me want to keep reading in the first paragraph. It may be action, but it may also be a quirky character, a place I want to know more of, or prose that falls upon my inner ear like music.)
4.     Readers resent the use of unfamiliar words. (That depends. The best writers make the definition of unfamiliar words clear from the context, and I like expanding my vocabulary.)
I’m not suggesting the people who made these comments were deliberately misleading their audiences. I am saying that overgeneralizations are logical fallacies. A sweeping generalization is one in which there seems to be sufficient evidence offered to draw a conclusion, but the conclusion drawn far exceeds what the evidence supports. Simply adding “some,” “many,” or “most” to these claims would make them more accurate. Doing so would also make me feel less like a reader who is being misrepresented or ignored. I may belong to a minority of readers, but I like to think my voice and my dollars count. And I don’t think I’m alone.

Are you bothered by sweeping generalizations about readers? What are your “soapbox issues”?

Wednesday, August 24, 2011

Tuesday Review on Wednesday: I'm Loving Loveswept, Part 2


The original Loveswept tagline was “Love stories you’ll never forget by authors you’ll always remember.” Random House is using the same tagline for the electronic reissues and original releases. In this case, I think the tagline is more than an advertising strategy; it’s an accurate description of the reading experience for many Loveswept books. I certainly found it true for my second Loveswept reread.


Remember the Time
By Annette Reynolds
Publisher: Random House/
A Loveswept Classic Romance Ebook
Release Date: August 8, 2011
(originally released 1997)
Four and a Half Stars

Paul Armstrong and Mike Fitzgerald have been best friends since third grade when Kate Moran walked into their high school English classroom one day and both of them fell for her.  At sixteen, Paul and Kate became a couple, and Mike had two best friends. But his love for Kate was a steady flame through their last two years of high school, through college, and through Kate and Paul’s thirteen years of marriage. Mike goes through a series of short term relationships, unable to commit because of his love for Kate. He even marries a woman who reminds him of Kate, but he can only regret the pain he causes his wife when she realizes that she has been a poor Kate substitute. Mike’s divorce is years behind him when Paul perishes in a flash flood and leaves Kate a grieving widow.
“Grieving widow” becomes Kate’s identity: “Paul Armstrong had died two and a half years ago, and the only thing Kate had shown any interest in since then was his grave.” She allows her home to deteriorate, bills to go unpaid, dishes to go unwashed. She drinks too much, eats too little, and keeps human contacts to a minimum. Through it all, Mike has been there—supporting her, loving her, enabling her to continue in her grief. One day he responds to a request help her avoid one more thing with a firm no: “Saying no to Kate was one of the hardest things he’d ever had to do. He’d watched as she’d gone from vital Kate Moran to needy Kate Armstrong to ‘Paul’s wife’ with nothing left that resembled the girl he’d grown up with. He didn’t want to watch anymore.”
That moment marks a turning point as Kate slowly and painfully returns to life and begins to discover and return Mike’s love. There are real obstacles to overcome, more than either of them suspects. They must come to terms with the past, accepting the flawed, spoiled golden boy who was Paul Armstrong, major league baseball player, adulterous husband, selfish friend and acknowledging his strengths as well as his failures. Kate has to see Mike as he is, Mike has to forgive Kate, and they both have to forgive other betrayals. Every once in a great while, I read a romance novel that makes me doubt the HEA is possible. Even as a reread, this is one of those books.

Remember the Time is a powerful story. Reynolds uses flashbacks and multiple points of view to allow the reader to understand not only Kate and Mike but also Paul and a couple of important secondary characters as well. There are no perfect characters in this story, only imperfect, broken people—some of whom learn, to borrow words from Hemingway, to be “strong in the broken places.” Mike is a historical preservationist architect, and the story’s structure borrows from the vocabulary and activity of his profession in its main divisions: Abandonment and Ruin, Preservation, Renovation, Reconstruction, Restoration. Anyone who has battled through profound grief will sympathize with Kate’s experience, and if some of us think that grief was unduly prolonged, we might do well to remember that grief is also a peculiarly individual experience. Regardless, that’s a minor quibble in an emotionally intense, unforgettable book.
In addition to the two Loveswept novels I have reviewed, the August reissues include Talk, Dark and Lonesome by Debra Dixon, The Vow by Julianna Garnett, The Baron by Sally Goldenbaum, This Fierce Splendor by Iris Johansen, Legends by Deb Smith, and Dream Lover by Adrienne Staff.
This novel has some of my favorite romance tropes? What are your favorites?




Tuesday, August 23, 2011

Tuesday Review: I'm Loving Loveswept, Part One


For more than fifteen years at the end of the last century, Bantam published category romances under the Loveswept imprint. According to the RomanceWiki, 917 books were published between May 1983 and January 1999, beginning with Sandra Brown’s Heaven’s Price and ending with Fayrene Preston’s The Prize. Among the authors of the remaining 915 novels were some who became VIP romance authors (Jennifer Crusie, Suzanne Brockmann) and others who became bestsellers in other genres (Janet Evanovich,Tami Hoag).  Some of the writers on my auto-buy list now are writers I first read as Loveswept authors (Deborah Smith, Jill Shalvis). Helen Mittermeyer and Billie Green were two of my favorite Loveswept authors, and I remember how much I loved Kay Hooper’s revamped fairy tales.



I was among those cheering Random House’s announcement in late June that Loveswept was being revived as an ebook only line with the first titles being released in August 2011.  In addition to reissues, the new Loveswept line will include new romances. Jessica Scott, already a familiar name within the online romance community, will debut in November 2011 with Because of You, followed by Back to You (February 2012) and Until There Was You (April 2012). Prices for Loveswept ebooks will range from $2.99-$4.99.



When ARCs of the first reissues became available to reviewers through NetGalley, I requested two I remembered fondly.


Lightning That Lingers
By Sharon and Tom Curtis
Publisher: Random House/
A Loveswept Classic Romance Ebook
Release Date: August 8, 2011
(originally released in 1983)
Five Stars


Philip Brooks is an environmental biologist who lives alone on the summer estate, Lily Hill, all that remains of his family’s great wealth. To pay taxes so that the land can be preserved for wildlife, Philip works as the star attraction at the Cougar Club, a male strip club.

Jennifer Hamilton, very young and very shy, is the newest addition to the library staff of Emerald Lake, Wisconsin. On a night out with her co-workers, Jennifer reluctantly agrees to visit the Cougar Club.  Halfway through the first act, she retreats to the restroom. She’s even more embarrassed by the second act, and in trying to avoid looking at the stage, she exchanges a fraught look with “the most handsome man in the world.” She’s shocked but attracted when he turns out to be the third act, “the number one male dancer in the Midwest.”

Philip is equally attracted to Jennifer, and he pursues her, driving her home, going to the library, sharing with her his passion for the wildlife he protects. Determined to resist him at first, Jennifer eventually yields.  She wrecks her car on her way to him and almost freezes to death. Philip saves her from hypothermia, introduces her to his pets (a screech owl named Chaucer and a brown hen named Henrietta), and dances with her to music from an old gramophone before they make love. There’s still the problem of his profession, and it leads to the black moment when Jennifer’s mother writes that she’s planning to visit the Cougar Club. But this is a romance, and the dark night leads to a golden morning and a satisfying HEA.

I worried that I might find a twenty-eight-year-old contemporary romance dated. But aside from a reference to Jennifer’s Dorothy Hamil hairdo and the wounds inflicted by her illegitimacy, the story has worn very well. Twenty-first century readers may find Jennifer’s innocence unrealistic; even in 1983, she would have been extraordinary. But the authors present her as a woman not of her time, as unfledged as the baby owls Philip rescues. She thinks of herself as “Jennifer Hamilton, who’d spent a lifetime of twenty-three years misplaced in an era of sexual liberation.” Others may find the lush prose not to their liking, but I loved it. Phrases like “the lace-work caress of his hands” and sentences like “memories collected in her mind like intimate postcards” still sing in my head.

I’ll post my review for the second Loveswept reissue I read tomorrow.

Have you read any Loveswept romances in the originals or as reissues? What do you think about a stripper hero and a librarian heroine?

 



Friday, August 19, 2011

Gifts from a Writer’s Notebook

Today was an ordinary day. The things I did—reading, writing, running errands, spending time online and with family members are all part of my day-to-day life. To an onlooker, nothing I did would appear to offer fodder for a writer’s imagination. But I end the day with five gifts, notes about five scenes I observed today, one of which gives me exactly the details I need to revise a scene to give it greater immediacy and power. The other four will doubtless make their way in some form into other manuscripts.

1.     Waiting in line to check out books at the library, I watched a father and daughter. The line was long, and the little girl, whom I judged to be between three and four, grew impatient. She asked her dad, “Why are we here?” When her father reminded her they were getting books for “PawPaw,” who liked to read, she said. “I like to read.” Then with a great sigh, she added, “But books are better when we don’t have to wait.”  All of these details and more are carefully noted, and the next time I need to think about child speak . . .

2.     The teller at the bank is a sweet girl, the daughter of an old friend. She’s been officially engaged for five days, after a long relationship that her parents feared would never culminate in marriage. Her ring is lovely, and I dutifully admired it. But I made mental notes of the glances she kept darting at it, the gesticulations to display it, and the smile that seemed etched on her face. I suspected if I could have seen her feet that I would have found them several inches above the floor. She’s a secondary character just waiting to be written.

3.     I had to do a grocery store run too, and Thursdays are senior discount days. I followed a white-haired, 80ish couple through the deli, produce, and canned soup departments. In the bakery, the woman debated cheeses. The man said, “Anything but Gouda.” She bought Gouda. In the produce department, she considered three kinds of grapes. He said, “The purple’s better for us.” She bought white. On the soup aisle, he said, “I’m sick of tomato.” She said, “But it’s on sale” and dropped four cans in their buggy. I think there’s a subplot there.

4.     I was reading in my room when I heard a visiting relative--a soft-spoken, peace-loving soul—shout “You SOB, you don’t know what you’re talking about. The least you could do for what those idiots are paying you is get the damn facts straight, you asshole.” I rushed into the living room in alarm. The big guy was standing threateningly in front of the TV. When he saw me, he reddened, ducked his head, and apologized, explaining that a particular sportscaster didn’t know a certain body part from an aperture in the earth. I’m adding a scolding mother to the scene.

5.     I took an afternoon nap, something I rarely do but allowed myself today since I was awake late and up early. If one can have nightmares in daytime, I did. I awakened with my heart pounding, my brow sweaty, and my whole body shaking. For a few seconds when I first woke, the dream seemed dreadfully real. It took me a minute or so to recognize familiar furnishings and feel safe. Tonight I revised a nightmare scene with all these details fresh in my mind and in my notes.
Do you keep a notebook? What extraordinary things have you seen in your ordinary days?